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Re: Unbound
Hello, teenweirdo! An interesting piece you've got here. I especially like the repetition of "bottle"-- gives it a nice flavor. The only other thing I feel the need to point ...
Apr 29, 2008 -
Re: sanctum is real
Does the first person to access the Super-Special-Awesome Hidden Page get YWS swag or something? XD Sanctum seems to be the YWS Poltergeist!
Apr 25, 2008 -
Re: sanctum is real
I feel like I'm in an episode of LOST. :) Really? To me it seems more like "Heroes" for some reason. Sylar, I mean. XD
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: Another poll for school
I voted English, but my second will always be music. ;)
Apr 24, 2008 -
Re: Steampunk: The Schism.
Name- Ingo Speices- Dwarf -- Swarf(?) Age- Middle-aged (for a dwarf?) Hair Colour- Grey Eye colour- Black Personality- He's always a little stressed and is easily annoyed when talking about ...
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: I need some help with this site?
For a start, you need an animation that isn't too big, file-wise.(I had this really excellent Marauder's Map avatar that wouldn't upload, so you might be trying something too big ...
Apr 19, 2008 -
Re: what are some good villan names?
The single best name resource ever. Arabic or Welsh names seem particularly dastardly. My only other advice: At all cost, avoid using the sound "mor". It's been done before, and ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: Dejection
Hello, black star! --This is navel-gazing and, to use a harsher term, emo. Most lines have a reference to you (I, my, me, et cetera) and how pathetic you are. ...
Apr 16, 2008 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Last night I finished "The Grass is Always Greener over the Septic Tank" by Erma Bombeck, today I'm reading "I Shouldn't Even Be Doing This! ... And Other Things I ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Regarding Username Changes
He's buying time. XD
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: The Plot Against Professor Maple
Hello, Tag! Oooh, this looks interesting! I only have a few things to point out: Pacing, pacing, always pacing. Professor Carmen itched at his beared, nose scrunched with a childish ...
Apr 12, 2008 -
Re: Newbie! Newbilicious.
Welcome to YWS! I'm Sumi, and since you obviously don't need any pointers on the site, PM me if you want a review. ;) Ooh, Reliant K. They're delicious. :D ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Mage Light
Serene-Angel: Please critique at least two other pieces before posting your own! It's in the YWS rules. Space this up, break it into 1,000-2,000 word pieces and then post. Any ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: Fixed Blink-spelling&redid a line.
Hello, Emily! And welcome to the YWS. Feel free to PM me if you have any questions on the site. :) Interesting poem, though there are a few things I'd ...
Apr 11, 2008 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Meep --Oh my gosh. By Diana Wynne Jones? XD It took me three months to read that. Only 200 some pages. 'Lainna -- make sure you have a lot of ...
Apr 9, 2008
